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Dreaz JPEG Jedi 
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advice u shall get:
shadows would be a nice addition. some kind of outline would make it easier for the viewer to seperate flesh from... more flesh.
try toning down the colors, till you feel bold enough to not care.
a better motive would help as well. try a wider canvas, just to give space for better composition. right now you got a square canvas with a girl filling out the whole space. if that was a good way to compose a picture, cinemas would look different today, if you know what i mean. ;-]
keep it up.
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