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I can see what Yangi means about the background seeming like the focal point of this image. I think it's because you've used an old technique here where pretty much all of the lines (branches, vines, leaves, even the cliff outline) seem to point to that area of the image. I don't know if you did it on purpose or not, but it does tend to draw the eye right toward that open area of your image which is a little too under developed. That said, I do love your lighting, and line work in this image. It has a nice sketchy feel that I like. I'd like to see what the piece looked like if you worked on that background a little more. I bet it would be very cool.

Hi Lauren - I think this is a beautiful piece. I especially love the dark corners - the vines and branches and moss are VERY nicely done. Tres bon! P.

I'm not too sure about the background, it seems to be the focal point which is a bit disappointing since this is the least detailed section of this work.
Nicely drawn though; I love the vines draping over the trees, and the arrangement of fern leaves is also pleasing.
Good work.